IB English A HL essay
I started the essay, only doing the introduction, and there were some points that the teacher had:
-your introduction does miss one part: the hook. The hook should actually introduce your subject matter/topic
-You should add a line of inquiry before your thesis statement. What question does this essay raise? and see how you can internalize identity under feminism
1300-1500 words
no plagiarism
I uploaded the document where I started the essay, the names of the paintings are in the document; you can search them up
rubric:
https://www.sevanoland.com/assessment-criteria.html
