please rewrite this paper based on the comment, be more specific on certain issues.
Thanks for submitting this, I read here that you have some important critiques of many educational institutions, though there are most likely some that you see as doing good, culturally sustaining work? For instance, those we highlight in the book. I’m not sure from this description what you plan to do for your project. Option 2? What sort of topics will you reflect on and deepen? Why are those topics important to you? Let me know what you plan to do. I look forward to your project
