Here is the comment for the paper;
“Make sure you format your document. There is no linkage of what you are writing about in the assignment.”
So I need the 2nd draft which is more linked with the title. There is a lot of information about shadow banking in this paper. I need information about Shadow banking effect, Global financial Stability and the connection between them. There is no information about Shadow banking effect and the global financial stability in this paper. So you need to add and write about these two subjects including a linkage between them which is the most important thing(Linkage between Shadow banking effect for Global Financial Stability) for this capstone project. And also this paper is APA6 i needed in APA 7. Thanks in advance.
