PERSUASIVE ESSAY- Has the internet made people less kind?

PERSUASIVE ESSAY- Has the internet made people less kind?

Guidelines for Achievement A persuasive essay: 

begins with a concise statement of position on an issue that will interest the audience.

  presents its points clearly and logically.

  supports its position with valid evidence and logical arguments (facts, statistics, examples, reasons, expert opinions) and responsible appeals to emotion. 

addresses an audience whose views probably differ from the writers.

  anticipates opposing arguments. 

ends in a way that prompts readers to change their thinking or to take a certain course of action.

at lease 5 paragraph  see attachment for detail