In this discussion, you will share a draft of your case study introduction. You will also give and receive feedback from your classmates.
Initial Post (due by 11:59 p.m. on Friday)
Post a draft of your introductory paragraph. Be sure that your introduction includes a “real-life” instance of your social issue and your thesis. Refer to the sub-module on for tips and sample introductory paragraph. Also be sure that you demonstrate all the previously covered grammar skills in your writing.
Peer Response (due by 11:59 p.m. on Sunday)
Respond to at least one of your classmates and provide feedback on her/his introduction. Here are a few things you might consider when writing your response:
- Does the introduction include a clear and effective “real-life” instance? Suggest possible revisions to make the instance more effective and clear.
- Does the introduction include a clear and effective thesis? Suggest possible revisions to make the thesis more effective and clear.
- Does the introduction reflect all of the elements of a good introduction? If so, how? If not, why not? Suggest possible revisions to improve the introduction.
- What other insight or suggestions might you offer your classmate regarding her/his introductory paragraph?
