Please download the attached draft and see my notes on the right. The required components such as the abstract, introduction, data, and conclusion are all included, and my thanks for that. However, as you can see, I give you a lot of suggestions in the draft, and particularly, I ask your team to clarify which occupations are researched in the report. As for software programming, the occupation can be found in the Occupational Handbook and is okay, but you use other terms such as software developers and software engineers, and I did not know which is correct or the one you selected. As for game developers, it cannot be found in the Handbook, and you need to choose one again. The report should be written in single space rather than in double space, so please make sure to fix this as well.
