Video Critique

  

Watched two Video and give the comments which must be (1) substantive; and (2) constructive.  Due in 3 hours

I need 150 words comment for each Video 

Video1: https://cdnapisec.kaltura.com/p/2090521/sp/209052100/embedIframeJs/uiconf_id/45581741/partner_id/2090521?iframeembed=true&playerId=kaltura_player&entry_id=1_htcci2sv&flashvars

Video 2: