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08/24/23
You did a good job of identifying your target audience and the venue for your presentation, as well as communication strategies.
Just two additional strategies needs to be addressed:
How will you avoid issues with language or bias (i.e. using jargon or slang)?
What needs might your audience have (i.e. hearing impairments, language barriers).
Presentation of Issue: Provides brief description of the sociopolitical context to situate your issue and provide context for your audienceCriterion Feedback
08/24/23
The revisions requested for your proposal will also need to be done for your this rubric item in your slideshow.
Recommendation—Main Idea: Articulates your main idea and why it is important, using relevant and credible sourcesRecommendation—Call to Action: Describes a course of action or actions aligned with main idea that includes potential benefits and drawbacks and is supported using relevant and credible resourcesCriterion Feedback
08/24/23
Your call of actions from your proposal need to be aligned with those in your slideshow.
In addition, you will need to discuss the benefits and also identify drawbacks.
What specifically are your recommendations for improvement? What are the benefits of these recommendations? How does your identified benefits support the recommendations? You must also identify drawbacks. What are the drawbacks of implementing your recommendations? Are there any potential considerations to consider with implementing your recommendations and call to action?
Be sure you have supported your recommendations, as well as benefits and drawbacks, using relevant and credible resources.
Communication of Explanation: Creates a narrative that aligns to the norms of the public venue and addresses cultural needs and expectationsCriterion Feedback
08/24/23
You have included some good element to a communication strategy. For your next submission, be sure to focus on communication strategies for your presentation, not to the general community. Addressing diversity is one element of good communication but there are several others:
Think of this rubric item as an ‘addendum’ to your presentation which is not intended for your audience.
Please include an additional slide that evaluates your communication strategies and plans for your presentation.
What are the norms (rules) of the public venue where you will present your information? How do the norms presented align to the audience/public venue in which you are presenting? For example, if presenting in a conference room then there may be a requirement that the event maintain the highest levels of professional conduct including in speech, which is completely different from presenting at a community center or local space.
How has your presentation addressed the cultural needs and expectations of the group (i.e. some audience members may speak different languages and have different backgrounds and cultural beliefs)?
The goal of your presentation is to help your audience support and champion your topic. How is this achieved when the audience may have different cultural views from your own? By using speaker’s notes and/or other visuals, how will you ensure these communication methods support the needs of your audience?
Appropriate Practices: Uses conventions and practices appropriate to persuasive argument, suitable for a variety of cultural backgrounds, and free of biased languageCriterion Feedback
08/24/23
Please add a slide which discusses how you will use conventions that are appropriate to persuasive argument. They should be clear, logical and suitable for a variety of cultural backgrounds. They should eliminate figurative language such as metaphors, idioms, similes, etc. and enhance the accessibility of their information with alternative text or transcripts that identify verbal or visual content. They should avoid communicating bias, either intended or unintended.
In the Unit Resources: Communication Methods and Strategies the reading: “Writing Commons, Use Language That Is Sensitive to Your Audience” discusses the importance of using language that is appropriate to your target audience. It provides examples that will help you revise language within your writing and presentations to diverse audiences that is respectful and inclusive.
Written answers are clear; use correct grammar, sentence structure, and spelling; and show an understanding of audience and purposeCriterion Feedback
08/24/23
Your writing looks good so far and will be further evaluated.
Lists sources where applicable using citation methods with no major errorsCriterion Feedback
08/24/23
As you add additional sources for your revied rubric items, be sure to cite them.
