Any topic (writer’s choice)

Hi Im doing an essay Im Working at Wendy by Joey Franklin. I already finish my Thesis statement. My Thesis is Judgement is an unnecessary burden faced by Wendy Workers. This essay have to be in MLA format and have five paragraphs which includes the conclusion as the last 5th paragraph. Ive already created two hooks to grasp the reader attention but Im not sure which one sound better. The hook is attached to the files Ive sent you in the beginning. This essay is due today at 11:59 pm tonight!!!! Can you please help me?? Thank you