dialogue practice

 

Exercise:

Please read the following piece. You will rewrite it, correcting the dialogue. Please use a separate lined sheet of paper to rewrite the conversation. Remember to start each persons dialog on a new line.

I love to go to the movies Cameron said but there is nothing good showing at all I know Marcie replied it is crazy how many crappy romantic comedies they churn out tell me about it Cameron exclaimed if I see one more stupid Kate Hudson/Matthew McConaughey puke-fest I will personally poke my eye out with an ice-pick and perform my own lobotomy I think that may be a little bit outrageous Marcie pointed out but I can get behind the sentiment my big beef, though, is the terrible horror movies lately what happened to scaring us rather than grossing us out would you rather go out to dinner tonight Cameron asked sounds like a plan Marcie agreed they left to go to the corner deli, walking arm in arm.