Please Revise the English paper
Make it Personal and Persuasive
Correct grammar
Developed body paragraphs with topic sentences, clear evidence-based support, and analysis for all main points. Paragraphs are structured with logical flow and organization.
Created a conclusion which summarizes the papers key points and offers a final appeal targeted towards the audience to encourage them to adopt the argument presented. The appeal is evidence-based and well-aligned to the argument presented.
Utilized four or more appropriately cited, credible, and high-quality sources to support main points. All in-text and source list citations were formatted according to SWS style with minimal errors
