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You have quite a bit of information Ahmed but I am not sure what you are attempting to show. Is that Facebook is harming those organizations with whom they share data because the data is inaccurate and therefore less valuable than the prices Facebook is charging for it? Or is the collection and use of the data harmful to the Facebook users because they are targeted by advertisers and hackers who use the data to obtain information about the users vulnerabilities and personal information? Approach Good start. What specific variables are being analyzed? Is there a specific research strategy used to quantify then interpret that quantitative data? It appears Facebook has an algorithm for qualitative interpretation of the writing and text. What type of information does this qualitative analysis produce? Mention Deep Text in the Approach. Literature Review. Again, lots of good information. The problem is that the flow is difficult to follow. I think once we decide on a strong thesis statement you will be able to better organize the Lit Review and provide a more coherent flow of information.
Work on flow of the paper Evidence and Citations. References are reasonable and well formatted in the Reference section. Author date citations have no comma between author and date (Novak 2021) Review the UCOL Format and Style Requirements for Heading formatting (Heading 1 must be centered)
