I need a rewrite of the attached paper to reflect the following:
I went back to your audience analysis and your problem statement is actually the “costs to employers when employees do not have access to child care.” Everything else seems to stem from that. That is what you need to explore in order to decide what your recommendations can be. You really got more into the feasibility report in this. I would like to have a resubmit where you drill down to the problem, expand on that to make recommendations without any kind of persuasion (entirely objective) and then you can move on the feasibility report. You have half of that in here already.
The hardest thing about this assignment is that it requires you NOT to solve the problem. We are a nation of problem solvers. It is in our DNA, but this time, we have to go to the basic problem and explore only that without offering solutions until we reach the end when we can make some suggestions. Those suggestions become our research questions for the feasibility report.
