I need this to be looked over for the below: This is according to my professor’s feedback.
(PLEASE FIX THIS) For citations in this assignment, avoid MLA parenthetical citations. Instead, you need Chicago Style endnotes. Carefully look over the instructions in the paper assignment as this breaks down how to format these, but let me know if you have any questions. I did include a handout as well. It is in reference to a different course, but it is still helpful in terms of how to create these.
I think your headings work just fine for your paper and not a problem if you decide to keep them. I think they make sense with the flow and direction of your work.
(PLEASE LOOK AT THIS REALLY WELL) Carefully read back through your submission to catch any typos, capitalization errors, contractions, or formatting mistakes. This can pile up quite a bit and an easy fix!
(I have fixed this. However, if you can think of better please do) Under your “Opportunities for Social Work in New York,” five of the six paragraphs start with New York City. Work on editing this up some as it reads quite repetitive. Think about changing up the topic sentence for each paragraph to add a bit more variety.
(I have fixed this) For your bibliography, start with alphabetizing with the author’s last name. This will show you an example.
