I need you to correct the essay according to the mistakes that my Professor pointed out for the resubmission of the essay. The essay is already done and I’m attaching the essay file that includes remarks from my Professor so kindly go through all the sources of the essay to correct all the things that the professor pointed out.
essay: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1pJrOyF2r11JWO63ahGmq3wgVh0rR78g2/edit?usp=sharing&ouid=107090966468984678548&rtpof=true&sd=true