My thesis is Language shapes the way we think, see the world, and the way we live our lives.
The thesis should be the last sentence in the Introduction. The introduction should contain 5-7 sentences, either a quote, question. It should also contain 1-2 transition words.
The body should contain 3 paragraphs, 8-11 sentences each with a Topic sentence at the beginning of each paragraph. Each paragraph should be 3 supporting details (relevance, fact, opinion, observations, personal experience, quotes, etc.). Discuss the relevance and significance of the supporting detail to the topic sentence. There should be transition words about every 3 sentences in the 3 body paragraphs.
The conclusion should be 5-7 sentences and match the introduction with a quote story or whatever was in the introduction.
Word choice should be strong, descriptive, vivid, and detailed, avoid cliches, and watch verbs such as is am are was were.
