Show your ability to analyze, correct, and revise the following rough draft, giving your input on the revision necessary to improve the quality of this essay. You will show successful completion of this deliverable by:
Providing feedback for corrections/alterations using the Comments feature in Word (Review tab).
Respond to the six questions at the end of the student rough draft linked above.
Use complete sentences in all of your responses.
Ensure to follow the Grading scale
4- Students Word file and cover sheet are submitted for this assignment completely & correctly formatted in APA.
4-Student notes if all resources are included and if they are from credible, current academic resources as instructed.
4-Student notes that working thesis is shown and then offers revision steps to clearly indicate persuasive position and clarify reason for writing.
4-An organized effort to correct incorrect in-text citations and references list of resources is completed in correct APA formatting
4-Student notes errors of support in major details that do not connect to support for the thesis and offers valid corrections.
4-Student notes omission of well written and some inaccurate details and errors included and offers corrections. No grammatical or mechanical errors evident in good variety of sentences that use transitions effectively to discuss the paper & answer questions asked.
