**** Please Read the Feedback on the two Assignments!*****
1. Teacher Feedback
70 Good start. In order to receive a higher grade, you will need to follow the steps for commentary. I highlighted them in blue on your paper. Additionally, take a look at the examples. Your commentary should look similar.
****See Attachment on Connotation vs Denotation! Make corrections!****
2. Teacher Feedback
75- paragraph should be more thorough. The reasons should explain how/why your evidence supports your claim. In other words, why does that evidence matter when trying to convince someone.
****See Attachment on AP Video 4 Make corrections!****
