Topic Sentence; a strong grabber about what toxic masculinity is. Transition into typical gender roles and into feminism
Body paragraph; Why feminism is good for society and why society hates feminism. Early Gender roles, Puberty in boys, Puberty in girls and how early stages of puberty effects each later on in life (internalized misogyny in women)
Body paragraph; what it means to be ‘slut shamed’ or shamed as a women, How being shamed dates back to years and years ago/ women’s history. Brief discussion of men’s history, explanation on why men are victims from society, explanation on men’s issues. How feminism can be seen as a problem.
Body paragraphs; strong solutions, Ex. what to start teaching our children, solving different ways to be inclusive to others, devotion to change, breaking gender norms, explanation between the difference on gender and sex,
Conclusion; To make sure that change is possible
Tips; Only write in 3rd person (excluding the thesis statement) Make the transition smoothly from one topic to another, sound sophisticated but not wordy, Include parenthetical documents, only quote once per paragraph.
