Comments from rough draft. Daft is attached
The thing that I feel is missing is a description of some of the whys. What I mean is that there are so many choices here, likely informed by years or decades of trying different things, and yet I don’t have much sense of why certain things are on this list instead of others, and I don’t know much about why you make certain choices in the process. Try to find places to sprinkle a few of these in. Maybe include an anecdote or two as well.
