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Here is some feedback: – Your intro should be rooted in research and the problem in the larger context of education. You can bring in some personal reflection, but more research. You seem to have done this, but I wanted to just state this to be clear. -lit review: all of the studies seem appropriate. Make sure to discuss their methods and limitations…and how they helped shape your own methods. -Methods: they look good. I need to know what type of qualitative research you will be using (ethnography, grounded theory, etc…). Make sure you substantiate all of your steps in your methods with research in your written proposal (it seems you are doing that already). -I would need to know more about descriptive analysis…this is typically a quantitative approach. Do you mean comparative analysis