– Mention family background : income, profession
– Mention exact duration of employment at supermarket to justify gap (applicant may provide supporting documents to justify the same)
– Compare VIT with other Education Providers offering the same course
– Mention reasons for not choosing home country for further studies
– Mention future career prospects – organizations/designations applicant would like to work in along with expected salary after returning to home country
– Add incentives to return back to home country including social, economic ties, family, financial and political ties