It is time to put all the parts of the esay together. Before you submit it in one MSWord document, please revise and edit it carefully; simply putting the pieces together without significant revising and editing will not gain you many points.
- Revise your introductory paragraph with your hook, 2-3 sentences of supporting details and/or evidence, and thesis statement.
- Revise all three of your body paragraphs. Make sure you are putting your best arguments forward.
- Do not use direct quotes. We are focusing on paraphrasing ideas from outside sources in this class.
- Revise your conclusion.
- Revise the whole esay using ARMS (add, remove, move, substitute).
- Edit the whole esay using CUPS (capitalization, usage, punctuation, spelling).
- MLA format
- All parts to esay are attached.